Monday, March 06, 2006

Alone

Rising high touching the endless sky
Liberty that comes speaks with no shy
Insignificant a statue if trite to the eye
Alone it stands and lets the world espy

Pleasure it is to watch the ocean blue
Bluer round the islands, get the clue?
Can dismiss the idea, it’s just a milieu
Islands are alone let the thoughts chew

Success is struggle, you need no rest
He was just a human atop Mt Everest
Effort of several, one climbs the crest
Alone he stands, tries to live with zest

Higher one climbs, steeper the ascent
Lonelier it gets as you add each cent
Glorious they think is to live in a pent
Alone if you are, is it better than a tent?

Paradoxical!! Need to strike a balance
Lest you should encounter nonchalance
Alone in time with hope for a chance
Loneliness kills as it thrusts it's lance

8 Comments:

Blogger remainconnected said...

Kutti,

I can understand your mind when your scribbled these thoughts.I know you for a long time and I can smell and feel each and every pulse of what you mean...

I do feel the same at times,but this world is like that. I know you have read the "Fountainhead" it is a story of one man, Howard Roark,the epicenter being the strength of the individual...

Move on and shine on ..Keep blogging..A nice post to read

3/6/06, 11:52 AM  
Blogger Nandya said...

i really liked this one....me not a penchant for soulful poetry...but this really strung the chords...somewhere deep within....nice one...

3/11/06, 1:42 PM  
Blogger Known Stranger said...

why do a generally a scorpio gets so attracted by blue waters and sky

hmmm ?

3/14/06, 11:27 AM  
Blogger Kutti said...

# Tanay
Glad to know you liked it. Its hard to be the same individual all the time.

# Nandu
Partner in crime!!! glad to know you liked it. thanks.

# Known stranger
i don't thnk there is anything so scorpio abt it. why don't you point to someone else who is similar and i'll agree. Keep visiting.

3/16/06, 11:34 AM  
Blogger Sankaran Sreeraman said...

wow!! grt stuff... u r really getting better with every verse u add..

really love the part -
"Higher one climbs, steeper the ascent
Lonelier it gets as you add each cent"

so true n so well written...

3/20/06, 7:35 AM  
Blogger Kutti said...

#shanky
Am glad I could give a reasonable meaning to words. Thanks :)

3/24/06, 12:08 AM  
Blogger Mushi said...

Kutti,

Your poems have a lot of thought in them.
Good job. keep the poems coming !!

4/14/06, 10:19 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

:) Hope u never feel alone ever ..

4/6/10, 2:25 PM  

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